approval for my system please

New players can visit here to build a system, ask for hints and tips, discuss special options for their systems, post their new Jedi and propose skills and Force power for them.
Dragonmaster352
Dragonmaster352
Chriz
Chriz
Brend
Brend
Mercury
Mercury

approval for my system please

Post Dragonmaster352 » Mon Jul 09, 2012 7:06 pm
User avatar
Dragonmaster352
Storyteller
 
hi
here's the starting system of the Stellarian Triad Federation, pending approval of course
as for a location I was wondering if sector 7-4 was still available, if so I'dd like to be placed in the middel left

50 (:gas-mass)
- red/white binary star 19 mass
- brown dwarf cold orbit 5 mass
- brown dwarf cold orbit 5 mass
21 (:gas-mass) : 21 (:rock-mass)
123 (:rock-mass)
- medium planet 19 mass
- small planet 7 mass
- large moon 11x 77 mass
20 (:rock-mass) : 20 (:bio-mass)
220 (:bio-mass)
- medium planet type I atmosphere 76 mass
- natural life medium planet 19 mass
- water ocean medium planet 19 mass
- molten rock ocean small planet 7 mass
- large moon type II atmosphere 2x 42 mass
- large moon natural life 2x 14 mass
- large moon water ocean 2x 14 mass
- large moon liquid methane ocean 2x 14 mass
according to my calculations that leaves 15 (:bio-mass) for population = 1,5 (:pop)
5 (:special-point)
- trinary system 2 (:special-point)
- captured moon 1 (:special-point)
- Jackpot (:information) 1 (:special-point)
- homeworld 1 (:special-point)

Novalia system
red/white binary star (Novalia)

orbit 1: small planet (:hot-orbit) (Karios)
- molten rock ocean
- large moon (Lithia)
orbit 2: medium planet (:gold-orbit) (Stellaria)
- captured moon
- natural life
- type I atmosphere
- water ocean
- tranquillity, extreme crevasses, wet climate
- homeworld
- jackpot (:information)
- large moon (Lunia)
orbit 3: brown dwarf (:cold-orbit) (Lianee)
- trinary system (blue main sequence star)(moons become goldilocks)
- large moon (Caosina)
- natural life
- type II atmosphere
- water ocean
- high pressure, continuous tempests, short winter
- large moon (Serina)
- natural life
- type II atmosphere
- water ocean
- wet climate, solidified core, tranquillity
- large moon (Athion)
- large moon (Hellion)
- large moon (Mathi)
orbit 4: brown dwarf (:cold-orbit) (Kollium)
- large moon (Mio)
- liquid methane ocean
- large moon (Lin)
- liquid methane ocean
- large moon (Necrio)
- large moon (Winver)

homeworld is for the Astrians
I'll be waiting for a reply
Post Chriz » Mon Jul 09, 2012 8:19 pm
Chriz
 
The use of (:gas-mass) , (:rock-mass) and (:bio-mass) is correct.
The new specials should be fine this way.

Next step:
Put your system on the wiki. This means you will have to create the wiki pages for your system, stars, planets and moons. The system builder is far from finished on this part and will not be able to do this automatically yet for a while.
I suggest copy pasting the template from another system and filling in your own names.

After the system is on the wiki you can add your starting resources (zones, population, tradefleet etc.).

When this is all done we can go through a final round of validation.

If you have any questions on the how and what, feel free to ask them.
Player of the Praetorian Empire
Post Brend » Mon Jul 09, 2012 8:33 pm
User avatar
Brend
 
Sector 7 -4 is certainly available. I will update the map.

Note that things like trade fleets, hyperspace lanes and such go on your faction bookkeeping page, and not on the system pages. (Check some of the other factions for an example of this)
Post Mercury » Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:11 pm
User avatar
Mercury
Storyteller
 
We still need an entry on the map. Also, the system appears to have been finished on the wiki - it just needs zones and such assigned. If someone could check if everything else is good, I'd be most grateful :)
Post Brend » Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:09 am
User avatar
Brend
 
I've added the Novaria system to the map.

I'd rather check the system with all zones and bookkeeping stuff around, that saves me from having to go through it again when those are deployed...
Post Dragonmaster352 » Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:40 pm
User avatar
Dragonmaster352
Storyteller
 
I'll add those ASAP :)
Post Dragonmaster352 » Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:23 pm
User avatar
Dragonmaster352
Storyteller
 
ok I've added all the zones and bookkeeping
if anything is out of order please notify me so i can correct it. same goes for if anythings still missing
Post Chriz » Sat Jul 21, 2012 8:42 pm
Chriz
 
I have checked the whole system including zones and bookkeeping and everything looks good. You should be ready to become Inner world now. You can now officially ask the chancellor to change the status of your world to Inner world in the politics forum.

Starting from (:turn) 60 you can post your turn report in the Administrative Actions forum.
Player of the Praetorian Empire

Return to System and Character Building

cron