Character Approval: Salia

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Character Approval: Salia

Post Mercury » Thu Jun 25, 2015 7:22 pm
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I designed some stats for Salia. Would these be appropriate?
Post Dragonmaster352 » Fri Jun 26, 2015 2:07 pm
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Won't she just misplace it again? Having it somehow pop up in Obamas sock drawer or something? Or somehow becoming Appleblooms cuttymark?
Post Mercury » Fri Jun 26, 2015 2:39 pm
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This has been known to happen, but I am hoping that the wiki will retain a version history of the original data for future reference.
Post Brend » Sat Jun 27, 2015 12:41 am
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I have checked Salia's stats and have two remarks:

First, under the normal rules a Jedi is related to the world through the fact that Jedi Creation Force Level is affected by the population that lives on said world. This is only a relation in the rules, in the actual game there need not be a relation between them. I note this here so that this is clear to everyone. Furthermore, Salia's Force Level is sufficiently low to fit within the "a Jedi of a race that is not present in your system" limitation.

Secondly, you clearly state that Salia is a Youngling several times (in her description, in her fluff, and in her Jedi Rank). Everything except her Attributes checks out. You have given her attributes as if she is an Initiate, starting with a base score of ●● per attribute. However, according to footnote 2 in the Jedi Creation rules, Younglings gain a base score of ● per attribute. Based on the fact that you have made sure to mention "youngling" everywhere I looked, I have checked Salia's proposed stats as if she is a youngling. And she gets the following result: denied.
Post Mercury » Sat Jun 27, 2015 11:01 am
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I entirely missed the footnote, so I just went with what made sense. Adjusted!
Post Brend » Sat Jun 27, 2015 11:41 am
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When used like this, footnotes are evil.

With your correction, Salia is now approved!
Post Jhovall » Mon Jun 29, 2015 10:56 am
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Grats :D

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