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[Sundarian Federation]

50 Gas:

38 Gas Orange( Caoimhe), yellow(Brìghde) Binary Star.
Gives 3 Goldilock and 1 Cold orbit.
9 Gas Brown Dwarf(Cairbre) in hot orbit.
3 Gas converted into Rock

103 Rock:
Orbit 1, goldilock: Medium Planet(Glasslyn), Medium Moon(Swyndale) 22 Rock
Orbit 2, goldilock: Medium Moon(Seòsaidh), Medium Moon(Ghìle), Large Moon(Snowdale), Large(Ailean) Moon, Large Moon(Luag) 27 Rock
Orbit 3, goldilock: Medium Planet(Lochmere), Medium Moon(Faolan) 22 Rock
Orbit 4, cold: Medium Planet(Cairan) 19 Rock
13 Rock converted into Bio

213 Bio:
Atmosphere I, Ocean, Natural life on Medium Planet (Glasslyn). 114 Bio
Atmosphere I, Ocean, Natural Life on Medium Moon (Swyndale, Ghìle & Seòsaidh). 54 Bio
Atmosphere III on Large Moon (Ailean). 14 mass
3.1 Billion Extra population. 31 mass

5 Specials:
Homeworld (Glasslyn)
Vulcanic Greenhouse(Cairan)
Jackpot (Seòsaidh)
Jackpot (Ghìle)
Jackpot (Ghìle)


Zones:
Ghìle (with upgrades): 3
Seòsaidh (with upgrades): 3
Swyndale (Corp. Zones): 3
Luag: 1
Ailean: 1
Glasslyn (with upgrades): 2x , , ,
Glasslyn: , tertiary Information

Convertion
move Lochmere 1 , to Ailean
swapped a few climates around

[Mercury]

You list Cairbre as being in hot orbit. You don't have hot orbits so I am assuming it'll be in orbit 2, which is goldilocks. The gas price you calculated is correct for goldilocks orbit, so I assume its a typo. Otherwise your system and specials look good.

I corrected a wrong entry for the Glasslyn power zone on the wiki (mentioned system as guaire_systemyu for some reason)

Assumed zone list:

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Ghile:
   Upgraded:    3 crystal

Seosaidh:
   Upgraded:   3 rare

Swyndale:
   Upgraded:   1 SimTech Information corporate headquarters
         1 SimTech Information
         1 Gnosis Information

Luag:
   Not Upgraded:   1 rare

Ailean:
   Not Upgraded:   1 crystal
         1 crystal INCOMPLETE (394 / 2000)

Glasslyn:
   Upgraded:   2 information
         1 organics
         1 rare
         1 healthcare
         1 exotic matter devices
         1 ict technology
         1 entertainment
         1 research
         1 electronics
         1 power
   Not Upgraded:   1 holonet relays
         1 tertiary zone (information)
         1 healthcare
         1 exotic matter devices
         1 ict technology
         1 entertainment
         1 research
         1 electronics
         1 organics zone (NEWLY BUILT IN TURN 19)

I'll need you to provide a location for your unfinished power zone. It is currently listed

"Garbhan Zone 1 to become Power Zone: + 0 ? INCOMPLETE (613 / 2000)"

since that moon no longer exists in your new system, you get to move the (unfinished) zone to a world of your choice.

You mentioned swapping climates around but didn't list them. You need climates for: Glasslyn, Swyndale, Ghile, Seosaidh and Ailean.

You currently have 5.0 billion population on Glasslyn, 0.1 billion on Ghile and 0.1 billion on Guaire. Your new population is only 5.1 billion, so you'll need to remove 0.1 pop from somewhere.

Once that's all done, I will approve your conversion.

[Sundarian Federation]

Cairbre is indeed in the second goldilocks orbit.

As for the Zones:
-the assumption of the crystal zone in progress on Ailean is correct
-the newly build organics zone(finished turn 19) is to replace the tertiary zone(information). Glasslyn only has 19 zones.
- the powerzone currently in construction on Garbhan will move to Snowdale

New population will become 5.0 billion on Glasslyn and 0.05 billion on both Ghìle and Seòsaidh.

Climates
Glasslyn, stays the same,
Continuous Tempest, Monsoons, Hot Climate

Swyndale, changes to,
Tranquility, Solidified Core

Ghìle, changes to
Hot Climate, Volcanic

Seòsaidh, stays the same,
Extreme Crevasses

Ailean, changes to
Volcanic, Exposed Mantle, Active Core


that will be all, once approved i will converted to new system before the end of the current turn.

[Mercury]

Because of the upcoming fix to the population growth rules, I'd advise not having any population groups not in multiples of 0.1 billion , however as that will be a rule change you can change that detail then if you feel it isn't to your liking and not worry about it right now.

Your climates look okay. Kuddo's on the Ailean selection!

Definitely approved!

[Mercury]

In regards to the request in the turn report post:

Your system overview lists you as an entry between the two stars - this is caused by your product recomposition directive. I think this may also be the cause of information being listed with your special products. I'll discuss with Brend.

Cairbre is listed as a smaller blue partner in the description entry, though it was converted to a brown dwarf only. The wiki text is correct.

Cailean is listed in the description entry as being a Jovian Giant. The wiki text is correct.

Swyndale, Seosaidh and Ghile list the ocean type as 'Yes', which should of course be 'Water'. Glasslyn does list the correct ocean type.

Seosaidh lists 'Jackpot' as a planetary special (and also for zone 3) - this should of course only be for zone 3 (though actually something could be said for applying 'Jackpot' to the planet for convenience, the consensus and instruction is currently that it is applied only to a zone. I might want to look into this later for ease of registration though...).

You listed your climates for Ailean as Volcanic, Exposed Mantle, Active Core, but its currently on the wiki as Extreme Crevasses, Active Core and Exposed Mantle. This is legal, but different from what you posted earlier.

That all being said, your new entry has no problems that I can spot, so I hereby confirm that it is approved.

[Darones Rei]

Ailean climates were supposed to provide +10 on crystal production, the current set up on the wiki does that , the earlier listing in my setup doesn't hence the difference.

The other things concerning oceans i will change later this week.